No. of Recommendations: 2
Good, but long...
And isn't this missing something:
This is why I’m terrified the Democrats will win, but miss the reason they did. Yes, reversing the economic harms of Trump is important, but unless Democrats understand that the millions of people in the streets and the millions more who will race to the ballot box to destroy Trump and MAGA this fall are giving them power to end this regime from top to bottom.
...but unless...what will happen? I think he forgot something after "bottom"? Needs a closing ", they are missing the point." or something.
I also don't know what he's trying to say here:
The economy and accountability are the only real issues, and if Democrats screw this up because they think America wants to, there’s no second chance.
Should that be "aren't the only real issues"? And "American wants to"... what? I'd have said:
"The economy and accountability aren't the only real issues, and if Democrats screw this up because they think America thinks they are, there’s no second chance."
But maybe my reading comprehension has failed me this fine spring morn.
